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Epic Story

Post  Molach! on Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:51 pm

Ok we all are going to write one big story. There are a few simple rules. At leased 5 lines (preferred more) and no 2 posts in a row. Ill start us of, but remember you can do anything you want, no matter how unlikely it seems.

So lets begin…


It was a cold winter night, rain came poring out of the skies and thunder could be heard in the distance. It was the kind of night you would see in horror movies right before the killer strikes. Two men in black clothes walked into a bank, soaked from the rain. They looked a little nervous as if they were unsure what to do next. One man had brown hair and friendly blue eyes. The other man on the other hand looked like the bad guy in a b-movie with his black hair, eyes filled with anger and a big scar on his face. Both men looked at each other and the scarred man nodded as if the other guy just told him what to do now. the brown haired guy took a last look outside as rain continued to poor down. There was no turning back now.

(so whose next?)
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Post  The Force on Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:22 am

The people in the bank shivered as they saw the two scary men coming into the bank. The two men eyes were blue and brown. The security guard looked nervous so he walked up to the men and told them it was closed. The angry guy got hold of the guards shirt, he then threw him across the room. They looked at each other again and suddenly their eyes went red. The men's teeth started to grow into sharp fangs, they jumped across the room and started to rip the poor people apart....

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Post  Free2ryhme on Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:42 am

But then as they were ripping the people apart a bright burst of light appeared as seven figures came into the building. Those seven people were called the Super Seven, superpowers galore.
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Post  RussianMan on Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:48 pm

The two man-beasts looked up from their meals at the intruders. The brown haired man stood up and introduced himself as Fredrick and changed back in to a human. The other man stood up and introduced himself as Allen but without changing back. Allen's form dissapeared as he moved lightning quick across the bank torwards the seven men. One of the heros fell to the floor with a deep cut across his face. Another hero fell but got back up and grabbed the quick beast. He used all his strength to hold him still when Fredrick burst out behind him and clawed his face then rammed him in to the bank wall. At the time, police cars rolled up in front of the bank guns ready. The two beasts smiled at eachother then threw one of the super seven out the window in to the police lines. Afterwards they dissapeared. The super seven looked surprised, it had all happened so fast they could not step in.
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Post  The Force on Thu Oct 30, 2008 2:28 am

Allen and Fredrick were running down the ally ways until Fredrick stopped. He looked two the side and saw a number of homeless people. Allen asked "How the hell can you still be hungry?" Fredrick answered saying "Oh come on now that the super seven are after us we won't be able to feed in ages so we better fill are self's up." Allen signed they started to sneak up on the homeless people. They saw their chance so they changed quickly and jumped up. They then came back down and sliced the homeless people to death. They begun to feed until their heard anoise up in the sky was it a plane not it was the Super Seven....

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Post  RussianMan on Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:36 pm

Quickly, the Super Seven landed, ready for a fight only to realize that Fredrick and Allen were not in sight. The group walked a little closer to the mangled corpses when suddenly, the two appeared behind them. Quickly, blood was spilt as the two beasts cut their backs before they could even look at them. A loud crash from one of the Super Sevens fist sent Allen in to the wall, the ground shook violently and dust filled the air. All the fight stopped as Fredrick retreated to a safer spot to wait for Allen, the building collapsed completely. A figure stumbled out of the clouds, it was Allen, his face was peeled olmost completely off and it looked as if most of his bones were broken. With a sickening snap, his limbs fixed themselves in to position, his cuts healed and his skin recovered his face. With one last roar of anger, both were gone yet again. The Sper Seven helped the downed up and came over to the crash. Blood was everywhere, and a trail led the way to which they had left.
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Post  Molach! on Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:42 pm

Not wasting any time the Super Seven Started to follow the blood trail. There 2 foes needed to be stopped before they get a change to attack anyone else. As the rain pored down on the Seven Heroes. They realised they needed to find them fast, before the rain washed away the blood. And with it the trail. As fast as they could the supers followed the trail through a few streets and around a few corners when they ran into a dark and creepy ally. Without a second thought they entered knowing they could catch up any time.
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